Can you please give a critique on my first corporate track?

Hello Everybody!

(This is my first forum post here,
so please let me know if I'm doing something wrong,
so I can learn from my mistake.)

This is my first corporate track I made:
https://soundcloud.com/user-999193987/my-1st-corporate-music-try

and I would like you to give me feedback/suggestions.

Thank you very much for your help!

Everybody have a great day!

I'm not a music producer but I listen to a lot of music types, so if this means anything I think it sounds great, and flows very well and has a good overall feel to it. Nicely Done! Please check out some of my work if you have some time by clicking my profile name.