Why rejected?

I don't know why my music is rejected?. Please tell me any suggestion.
Thank You for help.:)

https://www.pond5.com/pt//soundcloud.com/midistore_pl/sentimental-moment

https://soundcloud.com/midistore_pl/sentimental-moment

Absolutely gorgeous piece! Wish I could help you get this track out there but I'm new here and don't know much. All the best! -Ken

It's a lovely piece and I think it definitely has some potential. It has a very sweet and simple melody that I could see fitting in a lot of different places.

I can't say their reasoning for why it was rejected, but I have a couple of suggestions that I think will help -

1. I'd work on balancing the volume and shaping the dynamics of the voices - particularly the high strings and bells that come in at ~0.28 could be brought down a lot, and the effect would be more subtle and delicate, and give more space to the mix.

2. While it doesn't necessarily need to be longer, I think you could easily add more sections and further develop your idea. A short bridge/contrasting section would also fit in nicely.

Good luck, have fun, and happy composing :)

The first 4 idea repetition/variations seem to fade out weirdly. Try connecting the sounds more smoothly.

Ashnero and Paulorego Thank You for good and helpful suggestions.
I will try to realize them.
:)