Another Critique

Hey there. I'm fairly new to the stock video game. I do video production full time, but only get around to shooting stock on a few days off. I want to keep building my stock portfolio, but thought I'd get some feedback from others before I push to shoot more. So let me hear it, what should I work on from here on out?

Thank you all.
Kyle

http://www.pond5.com/artist/KyleJefferyStudios

Your work is good! Sent you a PM