Looking for some feeback

Hi guys and girls! Would you be so kind as to offer some critique/feeback? I would appreciate it a great deal.
Thanks,
Charley

https://soundcloud.com/charley-hankins/isfethepa-full

Hi, Charley. Sounds good over here. Symphonic is not my area of expertise though, so I can't offer much in feedback. Nice melody and lift.

Thanks digitalrelay. I appreciate your input!