First upload approval

Shaw520 17 Aug 2018 15:50
https://www.pond5.com/index.php?page=edit_item&itemid=93665857

Here is one of my first approved uploads,...suggestion would be very helpful, thank you in advance.
DavidHornchurch 17 Aug 2018 21:05
They look fine to me the secind video panning back and forth is a little fast if you slow it down a little or make a slower version it might be better
pvreditor 17 Aug 2018 23:44
The four files I looked at looked nice to me, although I agree with David about the fast pans on file #2. Are files #3 and #4 from what we called "the Cascades" in the Catskill Mountains? I used to go there as a kid... it was a romantic spot to take a girl.
Shaw520 18 Aug 2018 16:30
Thank you for your suggestions and I agree, the panning on the river shoot is too quick. The cascade's you see are from a small tributary called the Marlboro Creek, near the Hudson River in the Mid-Hudson region. All of these clips are from the Mid-Hudson Valley Region.
pvreditor 18 Aug 2018 17:14
Shaw, I grew up in Walden, NY, so it must have been near there.
Shaw520 18 Aug 2018 23:49
Yes,.. Town of Marlboro,.. about 30 miles east of Walden,... right on the Hudson,.. these waterfalls you see here enter into the Hudson just a 1/4 mile after this clip.