Critique on Quality Request

Hey I just created an ambience last night and I want some feedback on how to improve the quality of it.

https://www.pond5.com/sound-effect/95619723

Thanks!

I guess first we would have to be able to listen to it?

I'll try again. :)
The file has to be online for sale. If its something you just uploaded or pending, only you can see it.

When I go to your profile, its says you don't have anything to view.

Jake