Looking for some constructive criticism on my mix

Hi fellow composers!
I uploaded this song on Pond 5 a while ago.
https://www.pond5.com/stock-music/88400188/walk-park.html
I'm pretty proud of it and I'm quite happy with the mix.
However, I haven't had any feedback on my mix, and i'd really like some experienced ears to take a look at it. I still consider myself in a learning process, and I would hate to have missed something inexcusable in my mix!

Hope you'll enjoy! And if you don't, please tell me why! :)
All the best!

Hi,
It is best to ask that question on the forums at VI-Control.net
People are usually super helpful on there.
Good luck
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Hi Paul! Thanks for your answer! I'll definitely subscribe to that forum!